From 79ed2ae6f61e9666f00b0ec35131735f65cb4535 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Laurent Bercot <ska-skaware@skarnet.org>
Date: Wed, 16 Jan 2019 18:15:13 +0000
Subject:  Doc reference fix! that's an old one...

---
 doc/s6-tcpserver4d.html | 8 ++++----
 doc/s6-tcpserver6d.html | 7 +++----
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'doc')

diff --git a/doc/s6-tcpserver4d.html b/doc/s6-tcpserver4d.html
index 94b2895..c1a509b 100644
--- a/doc/s6-tcpserver4d.html
+++ b/doc/s6-tcpserver4d.html
@@ -65,10 +65,10 @@ the same IP address </li>
  <li> <tt>-1</tt>&nbsp;: write a newline to stdout, and close stdout,
 right before entering the client-accepting loop.
 If stdout is suitably redirected, this can be used by monitoring
-programs to check when the server is accepting connections.
-The <a href="//skarnet.org/software/s6/s6-notifywhenup.html">s6-notifywhenup</a>
-program can be used before the s6-tcpserver
-invocation to notify listeners when the server is ready. </li>
+programs to check when the server is accepting connections. This can be
+used with s6's <a href="//skarnet.org/software/s6/notifywhenup.html">readiness
+notification mechanism</a> to make sure subsequent services do not start
+before the server is ready. </li>
  <li> <tt>-v&nbsp;<em>verbosity</em></tt>&nbsp;: be more or less verbose.
 By default, <em>verbosity</em> is 1: print warning messages to stderr.
 0 means only print fatal error messages ; 2 means print status and
diff --git a/doc/s6-tcpserver6d.html b/doc/s6-tcpserver6d.html
index 089293e..d8665fd 100644
--- a/doc/s6-tcpserver6d.html
+++ b/doc/s6-tcpserver6d.html
@@ -65,10 +65,9 @@ the same IP address </li>
  <li> <tt>-1</tt>&nbsp;: write a newline to stdout, and close stdout,
 right before entering the client-accepting loop.
 If stdout is suitably redirected, this can be used by monitoring
-programs to check when the server is accepting connections.
-The <a href="//skarnet.org/software/s6/s6-notifywhenup.html">s6-notifywhenup</a>
-program can be used before the s6-tcpserver
-invocation to notify listeners when the server is ready. </li>
+programs to check when the server is accepting connections, for instance
+s6's <a href="//skarnet.org/software/s6/notifywhenup.html">readiness
+notification mechanism</a>. </li>
  <li> <tt>-v&nbsp;<em>verbosity</em></tt>&nbsp;: be more or less verbose.
 By default, <em>verbosity</em> is 1: print warning messages to stderr.
 0 means only print fatal error messages ; 2 means print status and
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